Saturday, February 16, 2013

My Story! :)

Hey guys!

Today I walked in a race today at our church!  I wasn't trying to win, it was more just for fun. :)

Anyway, I thought I would post some of my story that I've been working on today!

I hope you like it... let me know what you think. :)

Chapter 1

Faster and faster I ran.  All I could think about was getting away from there, the place that had so long been called my “home”, the place that had scarred me for life.

It was around midnight as I made my way down an old back street.  Just an hour earlier, I had snuck out of my parents house with a backpack full of supplies in it.

I had endured fourteen years of abuse by my parents, and I couldn’t take anymore.  I felt like every bone in my body was about to break.  Bruises and scars were everywhere on me.  I collapsed onto the ground.  Tears threatened to burst from me at any second.  

Suddenly, I stiffened.  I heard footsteps coming towards me.  I stood up slowly.

“How could they have realized I left so quickly?” I thought to myself.

My sadness suddenly turns to anger.  How dare they hurt me!  How dare they come after me!

The next thing I knew, my hand had swung back.  I heard a type of buzzing noise, and then I threw with all my might what looked like a purple ball in the direction of the footsteps.  It landed with a loud CRACK!

Then pain took over my body again.  I fell to the ground and knew no more.


I blinked.  Groggily, I sat up.  Oddly enough, my body didn’t hurt anymore.

I glanced around with surprise.  The room I was in was painted lime green.  Posters were hung on the wall with horses-wait, were they horses?  I leaned forward.  No, they were pegasuses!  The bed I was lying in was a soft pink color, and was so warm and cozy.

Across the room was a wooden desk.  I slowly crawled out of bed and walked over to take a closer look.  The books on the desk consisted mainly of two subjects: magic and thunderstorms.

“What in the world?” I thought with confusion.

Where was I?  How did I get here?

Suddenly, the door to the room opened.  I whirled around.  A lady was standing there with a smile on her face.

I was about to get my questions answered.

It's definitely not the best, but I hope you guys enjoyed it! I'll probably make a tab for it. :)



  1. I really enjoyed it! Great job!

  2. I love it! :) Do you think you will post more of it in a continuing series?

  3. Eww! How interesting! Will you put more up! I'd love to here the rest of it!

  4. Thanks so much girls! Yes, I will put more up very soon! :)

  5. I agree with Jess and Rebekah, you need to continue it!

  6. Wow, this sounds great Hannah! I can't wait to hear more! :)

  7. Continue, Continue, Continue, CONTINUE!!! :D